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Post by The Tenth Doctor on Aug 29, 2010 8:16:18 GMT -5
Dragon, as we've talked about before, mainly on fanfiction, you have a habit of making your characters too powerful or too smart. You said that you would tone down Neku's smartness in this RP, but I haven't seen the evidence of that. In my mind, there has been no change. Please, please tone down your smartness for Neku. I was trying to take care of this gracefully in the RP itself, but apparently it didn't work....or you didn't get the hint.
That's why I'm confronting you about this now.
Please check your private messages on here.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2010 17:25:51 GMT -5
Alright, I'm REALLY sorry if this comes out as rude, I dot mean it to sound like that.
Well in regards to Neku, I disagree. So far in this RP I've only had him do two things, hack Torchwood and make the disruption field, both of which were in his background. I don't see how I'm making him the most intelligent human if he got the base guide for the disruption field from Torchwood. And in the RP what you're suggesting is that he's involved with Torchwood, which changes his background and personality by a good deal. I just don't really see what I've sone so far that's overpowering him.
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Post by The Tenth Doctor on Aug 29, 2010 17:59:55 GMT -5
No, I don't mean to suggest that he has to work for Torchwood -- that is the Doctor's assumption. However, someone could have left him a trail -- he wouldn't have even had to know that it was a trail -- do you know what I mean? Like they could have intended him to hack into stuff and discover it. You know...like maybe their security software detected that someone was trying to hack into it -- so they just made sure that they didn't prevent it...and planted a file or something.
Does that make sense?
I'd forgotten that was in your character bio, as I didn't really read it when you posted it here. I just assumed it was the same that you had posted in fanfiction, so I approved it without reviewing those details.
So yes, part of this is my fault...but still, it makes Neku sound too smart. That's why I'm trying to do something here that would allow him to still be recongized for having high intelligence, but that limits it a bit. It's not really believable that Torchwood's systems would be hacked without their knowing.
Does my proposal here sound okay? Still in keeping with your character -- don't have to change anything in his personality, but it makes it seem more realistic and believable.
What I'm trying to say is that Neku would be innocent -- innocent that Torchwood was allowing him to hack into the files, innocent of their intentions, and they would plant some stuff that he didn't know he'd find.
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